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Re: oh but then she says
4th Sep 2013 4:03am
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4th Sep 2013 9:32am
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4th Sep 2013 11:15am
Re: oh but then she says
4th Sep 2013 5:46pm
It's smart to include the headline into the poem and to directly progress into the poem. Yes, it's utterly sensual. The fewer words the more room for fantasy.
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4th Sep 2013 6:16pm
Re: oh but then she says
5th Sep 2013 2:56am
Aaahhhh...EXACTLY!!
Concise...Precise...and soooo Perfectly Sensual!
Enough said!
Enchantress
Concise...Precise...and soooo Perfectly Sensual!
Enough said!
Enchantress
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5th Sep 2013 9:54am
Re: oh but then she says
Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 11:10pm
this could turn on just about anyone.
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7th Sep 2013 11:19pm
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 3:01pm
or lead to orgasmic writing.
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