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Once
You loved me once
and now we're friends
What I feel I cannot show
for the sake of the friendship
If you feel more I do not know
perhaps I have no right to feel it
and just because I hold it back
doesn't mean I won't reveal it
and now we're friends
What I feel I cannot show
for the sake of the friendship
If you feel more I do not know
perhaps I have no right to feel it
and just because I hold it back
doesn't mean I won't reveal it
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Re: Once
Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 10:19pm
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30th Aug 2013 10:44pm
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Re: Once
30th Aug 2013 10:38pm
really nice...i guess
we write what we
hold back in speech...
at least at first...
we write what we
hold back in speech...
at least at first...
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30th Aug 2013 10:42pm
Re: Once
Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 10:48pm
very relate-able poet jagracia...
nice little write
strider
nice little write
strider
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re: Re: Once
As the Roman playwright Terence once said:
Homo sum: humani nil a me alienum puto.
Homo sum: humani nil a me alienum puto.
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31st Aug 2013 00:46am
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Really! As I already mentioned, fascinating! I also studied Latin and considered a teaching career. Refrained from it when realizing how much most of my fellow students hated the Latin language. Came to forensic linguistics later ...
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Re: Once
Anonymous
30th Aug 2013 10:54pm
I really enjoy the emotion
and sincerity you put into
your poems...sometimes saying
little is enough....
and sincerity you put into
your poems...sometimes saying
little is enough....
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re: Re: Once
30th Aug 2013 10:57pm
I strive to say as much as possible in the fewest
words. And as the great modern poet, dartford, once said:
"..and saying that, I've said too much."
words. And as the great modern poet, dartford, once said:
"..and saying that, I've said too much."
Re: Once
Anonymous
- Edited 31st Aug 2013 00:07am
30th Aug 2013 11:47pm
I just talked to a sweet friend of mine earlier about this exact thing. I looked on here and you had posted this. It really struck my heart. :(
once you owned my soul
your heartless words to me back then
still haunt me today
they have tamed this
passionate heart
to be chained within
never to feel what it once did
or would that be to speak
luv as it once felt to release
now concealed within itself
knowing hardly any passion at all
just going thru empty motions
holding back what is deep inside
cause you clearly don't want my luv
so I hold it to be forever silenced
once you owned my soul
your heartless words to me back then
still haunt me today
they have tamed this
passionate heart
to be chained within
never to feel what it once did
or would that be to speak
luv as it once felt to release
now concealed within itself
knowing hardly any passion at all
just going thru empty motions
holding back what is deep inside
cause you clearly don't want my luv
so I hold it to be forever silenced
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Re: Once
31st Aug 2013 00:55am
You have every right to feel what you feel. You also have every right to reveal it. And so you do. Through your poems and paintings. That's a blessing for you and for your the readers of your poems as well as for the admirers of your paintings.
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31st Aug 2013 5:30am
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31st Aug 2013 1:20pm
Re: Once
31st Aug 2013 3:35am
Love not on an equal scale ...Humm.
An age old dilemma. I hope it will balances out.
G
An age old dilemma. I hope it will balances out.
G
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31st Aug 2013 5:24am