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My Darkness And Demons Inside
Back into the depths of hell, I bury myself at your mercy
The pain, the hurt, the despair...
I believe there is NO GOD
Trials and tests we all go through
for what is to become of our wretched souls
The damnation the sorrows and pain.
For this day I bleed for you, with each cut
is deeper than before, the release of pain is felt
for my eyes cannot see beyond my grief
This heart has been chewed to pieces each piece torn,
cut into a million pieces
The lies, The deceit was I too blind to see?
The smell of fresh blood dripping as each drop falls
a moment of this life passes by,to lose oneself into a midst of Hell...
never to be brought back to this human race.
My demons I have disgraced For hell is not my place
Only a temporary shelter of placement
Beyond these earthly bounds is my dimension
where there is no sound, no hate no peace nor joy
only solitude..no desperation or fortitude.
To my Darkness and my Demons inside
come out,come out do not hide.
The pain, the hurt, the despair...
I believe there is NO GOD
Trials and tests we all go through
for what is to become of our wretched souls
The damnation the sorrows and pain.
For this day I bleed for you, with each cut
is deeper than before, the release of pain is felt
for my eyes cannot see beyond my grief
This heart has been chewed to pieces each piece torn,
cut into a million pieces
The lies, The deceit was I too blind to see?
The smell of fresh blood dripping as each drop falls
a moment of this life passes by,to lose oneself into a midst of Hell...
never to be brought back to this human race.
My demons I have disgraced For hell is not my place
Only a temporary shelter of placement
Beyond these earthly bounds is my dimension
where there is no sound, no hate no peace nor joy
only solitude..no desperation or fortitude.
To my Darkness and my Demons inside
come out,come out do not hide.
Published 24th Dec 2010
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24th Dec 2010 7:18pm
love how you break down and analyse and discribe metaphores kinda like my style keep it up and you dont rhyme everything :)i luv that
24th Dec 2010 7:29pm
24th Dec 2010 7:29pm
Dark indeed stated as a matter of fact with no recourse except despair. You express that very well, the core of this blackness comes alive indeed. Beyond melancholy, beyond despair? A state of mind at that moment perhaps or a way of life with great conviction? But not a life at all for the charactr, is it?
You certainly drew me in and gave me a peek inside all this pain and, if that was your true intent with this poem, by all means you succeeded. But it all leaves me with such a feeling of hopelessness and at the very best only death awaits.
I question the last line: If death eternal is what awaits, then how could there be demons in the state of the non-living?
"To my darkness and my demons inside come out, come out do not hide."
If I got this totally wrong, then please shed some light on this for me. thanks.
You certainly drew me in and gave me a peek inside all this pain and, if that was your true intent with this poem, by all means you succeeded. But it all leaves me with such a feeling of hopelessness and at the very best only death awaits.
I question the last line: If death eternal is what awaits, then how could there be demons in the state of the non-living?
"To my darkness and my demons inside come out, come out do not hide."
If I got this totally wrong, then please shed some light on this for me. thanks.
24th Dec 2010 7:33pm
Jim it is meant as for my demons to come out and do not hide beyond death, and other dimesionsions...there is a deep darkness inside full of pain and torture..to deal with these demons is a release of pain
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24th Dec 2010 10:27pm
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25th Dec 2010 5:00pm
Nice...i have lots of erotic passionate poems as well..i need to dig them out and publish them too.
Thanks...Dark Baby
25th Dec 2010 00:02am
This was amazingly good. You hare definitely a very skilled poet/writer. I enjoyed this. Can't wait to read more. (:
26th Dec 2010 7:07am
