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Private Party
An invitation to seduction's party
the event is limited to two
if the brashness is shocking
the desire is nothing new
it has been planted in images
that dominate a space in the brain
as if doom is expected
lust insanity flows ever like rain
the event is limited to two
if the brashness is shocking
the desire is nothing new
it has been planted in images
that dominate a space in the brain
as if doom is expected
lust insanity flows ever like rain
Published 29th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Aug 2013 11:38am
29th Aug 2013 11:37am
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29th Aug 2013 11:52am
Thank you sir! Shorter stuff is so infrequent for me I felt compelled to get it out no matter how inadequate it feels.
29th Aug 2013 12:37pm
29th Aug 2013 12:40pm
Thanks, wish I had the restraint and command of language to do more short writes.
29th Aug 2013 3:59pm
29th Aug 2013 5:50pm
30th Aug 2013 4:17am
30th Aug 2013 6:02am
Thank you! Hardest thing for me to do is keep things short so I am appreciative of the kind feedback.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
30th Aug 2013 3:12pm
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