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laughter, one of the greatest exilirs in life jesta..nice one

strider

thanks, Strider [:

just a little appreciation for the best medicine.

a nicely 'captured'
moment-of-mind....

like what this po'tree thing
is
for

kinda what it's for... it's mostly for the e--go, don't ya know. [:

thanks much, saxxman.

yes indeed m'dear
it's like iyam an avid dissupporter of myown e-gooooo & perhaps
every'one'else's self-indulgent claims to
(faux)self-A-wareness as is so ease'illy avail'able in ye'olde selfWorshippin'Marketplace......

)oh lord[y],I may have to use This as MyNextPoom in these here DUPdepths...i'magine that(

but, as is said in Proverbs: SofcknWhat{?},
       daddyo[!)

Reminds me of that saying about when you laugh the worst thing that happens is that other people try to figure out what you are laughing at. Sort of like when you go somewhere and many people from a different place are around. You start to look up and pretty soon everyone else is also, trying to figure out what YOU are looking at.

haha, yeah. one of those wee awkward moments. thanks for the stop-by, jazzhands [:

glad you enjoyed it, Gabriel. sincere gratitudes for your saying so [:

Jesta

Cool that you're posting stuff again. I like this. it's nice. but it's not enough, it's a teaser of a poem.

I like the image of the girl laughing aloud to herself and the guy smiling, the little red bus that doubles as a post van.

I s'pose on reflection, it's not like it's a half of a poem or anything but it does leave (me anyway) a strong desire to read more.

that said, I like this side of you, a more 'happy for want of a better word, so More!! more  at the soonest possible time :)

     shine on, shine like an arc light

ah, thelep. you're one greedy muthafucka, you know that? i'm tryna get my groove back, man... gimme a minute. [:

just kidding. thank you, Eamo, also sincerely, for the time and concentration you so often put into my scribbles. [:

that means so much to me, Rutart, thank you. as you must know, the doubts abound.

You placing the piece here is itself a private chuckle I can only guess at; left me feeling right with the world ... great trick, madam.  ;-)

my world and I aren't completely right
but I am gonna give a nod and a "mm hmm"
to Kaatho's comment

seems to have an added power with the context of where this is

nice to see your name pop up with a write!

haha, you know it, sista :D

and, LB, you motivated my head somehow, and this popped out of it the same day. thanks for the inspirado. [:

Am I a cynic or is the poem a problematic one? It may be a good thing for the girl to laugh in ignorance but the boy certainly doesn't seem to share neither her laughter nor her ignorance.
The staging is brilliant and effective. The seemingly happy little poem about a girl laughing even if she doesn't fully understand what's going on, is, deep down, worrying and disturbing.

oo, what an interesting take on it. thank you so much for your comment, Ophie... it's a joy to see the different ways people can mentally react to a little piece of writing. [:

Nice to hear
I like that you like it