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Painted Smile
A painted smile to please others
but you do not have to pretend for me
I feel your aching heart
I feel you fighting to hold on
but let yourself go if you wish
I will always catch you
but you do not have to pretend for me
I feel your aching heart
I feel you fighting to hold on
but let yourself go if you wish
I will always catch you
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Re: Painted Smile
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 9:10pm
Beautiful! We all wear those smiles at times. Look around you and know in comfort that you will be caught when you wear yours. Xoxo :)
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I don't plan on wearing anything.
I am naked and transparent,
look or look away...
(I have no painted smiles, I
just paint canvases.)
I am naked and transparent,
look or look away...
(I have no painted smiles, I
just paint canvases.)
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Anonymous
- Edited 24th Aug 2013 9:20pm
24th Aug 2013 9:19pm
Turn around real slooooooow. I want more than a look! Oh yes! Now move your body......I mean move that canvas a little to the sunlight. :)
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 9:20pm
Beautiful painting by the way. :)
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24th Aug 2013 9:21pm
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2013 1:32am
Well now.....we finally have gotten past the 30 minute foreplay. LOL!!! Bring it on....paint my canvas. :)
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Re: Painted Smile
24th Aug 2013 9:15pm
Soulfully sweet!
Aahhh--To have someone with whom we can always be ourselves...inspite of our flaws...and even when we make mistakes, that special person will always be right by our side ... This is perhaps one life's most treasured gifts.
Such beautiful sentiment shared! <3
Aahhh--To have someone with whom we can always be ourselves...inspite of our flaws...and even when we make mistakes, that special person will always be right by our side ... This is perhaps one life's most treasured gifts.
Such beautiful sentiment shared! <3
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re: Re: Painted Smile
24th Aug 2013 9:17pm
If you can't be yourself around your
closest friends, then what are friends
for?
closest friends, then what are friends
for?
Re: Painted Smile
24th Aug 2013 9:25pm
So True nothing more comforting when the person knows you are there for him or her
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Yes, being there for them is one of
the greatest gifts you can give to
your friend.
Welcome to the site!
the greatest gifts you can give to
your friend.
Welcome to the site!
Re: Painted Smile
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 9:50pm
I love the way you write and find a painting to go with it...your tumblr blog is gorgeous
Good artist in both media
x0
Kitty
Good artist in both media
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Kitty
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re: Re: Painted Smile
24th Aug 2013 9:59pm
thank you Kitty, your kind words
mean more to me than than you could
possibly imagine.
mean more to me than than you could
possibly imagine.
Re: Painted Smile
Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 10:05pm
a very nice write with the true feeling of love wrapped tightly in it!
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24th Aug 2013 10:28pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 24th Aug 2013 10:49pm
24th Aug 2013 10:47pm
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24th Aug 2013 11:19pm
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24th Aug 2013 10:53pm
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24th Aug 2013 11:19pm
Re: Painted Smile
24th Aug 2013 11:11pm
Freedom... We have to feel free to not to wear those fake smiles and do what our heart says. It's the most right way to live... and to love. Wonderful write.
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24th Aug 2013 11:21pm
True, Dan. The woman in question works
in a restaurant where she is required
to smile even when she doesn't feel it.
Her boss actually told her she looks mean
when she doesn't smile. You can't make this up.
in a restaurant where she is required
to smile even when she doesn't feel it.
Her boss actually told her she looks mean
when she doesn't smile. You can't make this up.
Re: Painted Smile
Anonymous
25th Aug 2013 1:11am
But I bet she smiles without being forced to when she's with you. Funny how that works...
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25th Aug 2013 1:16am
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2013 4:15pm
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25th Aug 2013 5:31pm
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29th Aug 2013 10:41am
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29th Aug 2013 6:28pm
Yes, thank you. I always paint to music
to which I have an emotional response
so it shows up in the paintings.
See more at:
http://jamayaa.tumblr.com/
to which I have an emotional response
so it shows up in the paintings.
See more at:
http://jamayaa.tumblr.com/