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More Thirst
Tears don’t come easy
they well up in the eyes
and trickle down the cheeks
wetting many sorrows
on my dry lips. Now I
know what thirst is for
they well up in the eyes
and trickle down the cheeks
wetting many sorrows
on my dry lips. Now I
know what thirst is for
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Re: More Thirst
22nd Aug 2013 8:32pm
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22nd Aug 2013 11:32pm
Re: More Thirst
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2013 9:56pm
Love these lines:wetting many sorrows
on my dry lips. Now I
know what thirst is for
Very deep, and emotional...
on my dry lips. Now I
know what thirst is for
Very deep, and emotional...
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Re: More Thirst
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2013 9:56pm
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22nd Aug 2013 11:36pm
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23rd Aug 2013 5:18am
Re: More Thirst
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 1:42am
as the tears flow
I lick them one by one
to once again
taste you in me
I lick them one by one
to once again
taste you in me
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 9:59am
Both pinkies if you want! LOL!!!!! :)
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Re: More Thirst
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 8:17am
HHmmmm - "What" thirst is for? or "Who"?
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23rd Aug 2013 12:08pm
Re: More Thirst
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 1:25pm
Thank you for a very good morning read
with my coffee!
with my coffee!
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23rd Aug 2013 1:30pm