Shadows

A little powerful write!

Thanks. Life is too short to not
get to the point right away!

Sadly true & precise...

just asking...

A little corner of your heart or soul is dying from sadness. Of a life that you can't touch or have. A feel of loneliness that haunts deep in your soul that only you understand and feel. If one took the time to look into the eyes of your soul they would feel and know. :(

You understood me because I sense
you have been there. As the Buddha
said: Life is Suffering.

Thanks, Gab. To be completely 'senseless'
would be a real tragedy.

Another short poem
As effective as ever
Good work
Kitty

My guiding principle: Be Terse!

Wow! This was an amazing short poem that packed so much within.
"Shadows on the soul" wonderful verse! Touches  the spirit of such lonely space

G

Thanks G. I'm trying to be short on words
and long(er) on meaning.

There is a subtle passion
here, lurking, forbidden,
a tease of words so to speak;)
Fav Lines:darkly insatiable
shadows on the soul

Ah, I am so transparent before
my angelic darkness...

Reading your poems always makes me want to go back to mine and see if I can say as much with as few words. Beautifully done.

thank you so much, my attention span
is best if the poem isn't too long

thanks so much