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what's her name?
i once had this dog
i mean it wasn't
my dog
it
was just
this bitch that
kept following me
around
but i finally
got rid of
her
i mean it wasn't
my dog
it
was just
this bitch that
kept following me
around
but i finally
got rid of
her
Published 22nd Aug 2013
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22nd Aug 2013 8:06pm
22nd Aug 2013 8:43pm
It's not a generalized opinion of the fairer sex,
Rather it's quite specific. No wide spread offense meant
Rather it's quite specific. No wide spread offense meant
This is a darkly humorous write ... But whenever I read something like this I often wonder what the response of the partner would be:
I would have followed your ass to the end of world
Then I got a good whiff
God, you're full of shit
Too much for any bitch
... Just flippin it for some fun ...
But cool write ...
... LSP
I would have followed your ass to the end of world
Then I got a good whiff
God, you're full of shit
Too much for any bitch
... Just flippin it for some fun ...
But cool write ...
... LSP
23rd Aug 2013 6:05pm
23rd Aug 2013 6:13pm
Glad you liked the humor ... Would you mind if I entered the response in a competition hosted by devilish? (Duplicate a style ... I think it's called)
There's a line or two more I want to add, but I want to keep it raw and succinct like yours ...
LSP
There's a line or two more I want to add, but I want to keep it raw and succinct like yours ...
LSP
23rd Aug 2013 6:19pm
