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Imagine
The purity of innocence
Powerful enough to conjure
A show of epic proportions
Picture the imagination
Cogs turning in a young mind
Painting the picture
Of innocence lost
The nostalgia of a feeling so pure
The "Anything can happen"
Felt only when imagination
Runs amock
And we take our pet elephant
For his first car ride.
I weep for my loss...
Intricate B
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Re: Imagine
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2013 1:40am
very nicely written poem
good work
good read
Kitty
good work
good read
Kitty
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re: Re: Imagine
22nd Aug 2013 2:18am
Re: Imagine
22nd Aug 2013 3:02am
The elephant I think should be a dog lol my opinion but I really like this piece it's very well said and kinda beautiful xoxo cz
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re: Re: Imagine
22nd Aug 2013 4:10am
Re: Imagine
Anonymous
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22nd Aug 2013 4:48am
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22nd Aug 2013 4:51am
Re: Imagine
22nd Aug 2013 5:36am
The picture I wrote this for..
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22nd Aug 2013 6:20am
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Re: Imagine
22nd Aug 2013 9:15am
Re: Imagine
22nd Aug 2013 7:10pm
Like this a lot had me reaching back to my days of imagined thoughts so pure.
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