Distant Mountains

Looking for a place to run from yourself? Come get me when you find that place. :)

Every time I try to run from myself
I end up running into myself.
I'm here at the airport, I'll wait
2 hours for you, then I'm gone.

This seems to need no
accompanying picture, it
has the feel of a large
canvas..nice, jag...

"Go big or go home"
applies to poetry
and drinking, not
necessarily in that
order

Even mountains change, given enough time. So glad their clocks are slower than ours.

True. Their changes are so gradual
we will not notice in our lifetime.

Distant and tranquil mountains... Great poem, Jagracia

thanks, dan

This comes across as a haiku
very concise but complete
very graceful
Kitty

Yes, Kitty, you are correct. In fact it is
a sestet with 34 syllables, five in the first and last lines, six in the second through fifth lines.

Got me here, love nature poems!

To have the patience of a mountain, lovely.

G

I had enough time to watch
those mountains from afar, everyday,
and come up with a poem.