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Early Winter
An abrupt Summer ending
and a short Fall,
Winter sets in for the long haul
these are the days
wet and nasty
during the worst
when the transplanting
takes place
most likely to survive.
In the Spring
set in late wet mud
the new buds spark
and the blossoms
that will bear the fruit
whisper all things.
runningturtle87
and a short Fall,
Winter sets in for the long haul
these are the days
wet and nasty
during the worst
when the transplanting
takes place
most likely to survive.
In the Spring
set in late wet mud
the new buds spark
and the blossoms
that will bear the fruit
whisper all things.
runningturtle87
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Re: Early Winter
19th Aug 2013 9:41am
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19th Aug 2013 9:43am
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19th Aug 2013 10:02am
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19th Aug 2013 10:18am
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19th Aug 2013 10:05am
My mother died of breast cancer 10 years ago on September 12. Her ashes are spread at the base of this bench, and this is the meeting place where my siblings and I come to meet to talk about the real things. If someone says,"Let's go for a walk," and then they end up walking to this spot and sitting down, there will be tears and memories. No one ever gave so much permeating and inspiring love, and this is the work that never ceases from day to day and on into the night....listening as if the world is right here and nothing else will ever matter as much as being a friend and letting you know that you matter.
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2013 2:12am
I love this idea. I want no sterile grave. I want mine spread around a bench at the dog beach. =)
I think I like your mother.
I think I like your mother.
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20th Aug 2013 3:09am
She would have liked you.....One time I stopped in a snow storm and picked up a hitch hiker in the middle of the night and brought him home to my house..everyone was asleep, and it was snowing hard, so I let him stay in my room, I was 16.
In the morning, I brought him to the breakfast room and looking up at him my mother asked, "White or wheat toast?" Not a word about his being there unannounced or his further travels.
In the morning, I brought him to the breakfast room and looking up at him my mother asked, "White or wheat toast?" Not a word about his being there unannounced or his further travels.
Re: Early Winter
19th Aug 2013 11:44am
From the harshness comes sweetness.Beautiful...peace to you and your family :)
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re: Re: Early Winter
19th Aug 2013 11:58am
After all is said and done, I feel like she is just now kicking in for the main event..thanks!
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2013 2:14pm
loved the last stanza rt!
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19th Aug 2013 2:36pm