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That should be me
If you see this girl
Tell her I am so sorry
And that she has no idea how lovely she looks
On her wedding day today
Let her know that I love her
And that today is my daymare come true
Wishes not so well that we could've worked out
But never to worry of me
And that I'll be ok someday...
Tell her I am so sorry
And that she has no idea how lovely she looks
On her wedding day today
Let her know that I love her
And that today is my daymare come true
Wishes not so well that we could've worked out
But never to worry of me
And that I'll be ok someday...
Published 17th Aug 2013
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17th Aug 2013 11:51pm
18th Aug 2013 00:31am
Thats right Nikk...there are never always happy endings..thankyou for reading :-)
Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 6:32pm
We believe in "besheret" - the destined one...however...I am on husband number 2 and he is the one....so I agree with Nikki....fate and destiny are inevitable.....We believe also in praying to find the "one". Prayer can only help.
Just my two cents.
Enjoyed reading your poem.
Kitty
Just my two cents.
Enjoyed reading your poem.
Kitty
18th Aug 2013 6:37pm
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24th Aug 2013 10:33pm
Oh shit, I've been there, bro. Painful ain't the word, is it. Fucking hell. I'm getting drunk. Pain is pain, but I love you for sharing your's, I really do.
24th Aug 2013 11:26pm
Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 10:24pm
Woah woah Woah. Real & Lovely!
7th Sep 2013 10:31pm
7th Sep 2013 10:43pm
If I see her,I'll show her this poem. I promise.
I really enjoyed reading it. (: I hope your heart heals
I really enjoyed reading it. (: I hope your heart heals
7th Sep 2013 10:53pm
