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In Memoriam
Lying
on her back
with one leg
cocked up
knee pointed high,
she sucks
on the stem
of a flower
and turns it
in her hand
as she teases him,
saying,
"He loves me,
he loves me not."
And another petal
hits the ground
over her head
as she tosses it
over her shoulder
and looks down
at the blossom
she is plucking
them from.
In the distance,
limb by limb,
his heart hits
the floor
at the thought
that ever
her mouth would stoop
to speak
of a day
when they
were never more.
He washes
the dishes,
and pushes
a broom,
but there
is no cleaning
the house
of cards
they have come
to inhabit.
Last petal,
and it ends.
"He loves me not."
Bursting
and shadows
and crushed velvet
and maps
of the meadows
where a million
fireflies have died.
runningturtle87
on her back
with one leg
cocked up
knee pointed high,
she sucks
on the stem
of a flower
and turns it
in her hand
as she teases him,
saying,
"He loves me,
he loves me not."
And another petal
hits the ground
over her head
as she tosses it
over her shoulder
and looks down
at the blossom
she is plucking
them from.
In the distance,
limb by limb,
his heart hits
the floor
at the thought
that ever
her mouth would stoop
to speak
of a day
when they
were never more.
He washes
the dishes,
and pushes
a broom,
but there
is no cleaning
the house
of cards
they have come
to inhabit.
Last petal,
and it ends.
"He loves me not."
Bursting
and shadows
and crushed velvet
and maps
of the meadows
where a million
fireflies have died.
runningturtle87
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Re: In Memoriam
Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 4:02am
Damn, man.
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15th Aug 2013 4:09am
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15th Aug 2013 4:19am
I refuse not to feel my feelings.....sad music exists for a reason....and various writers provide us with the messages we need....I must have them, each in turn, in order to let go in the final analysis....Additively, they create the garden of life.
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 4:41am
And some never understand this. Think only the positive feeling should count. Want and need and sorrow and sadness and loss are either false, or not to be tolerated.
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15th Aug 2013 5:20am
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15th Aug 2013 12:24pm
Thank you for being supportive on this point. I think that for us to only live for the weekends is to miss out on 5/7 of our lives.
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 8:43am
excellent write rt....
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15th Aug 2013 12:25pm
Looking at pain, even in an objective way, is like saying, "Oh, look, I've broken my leg."
Re: In Memoriam
15th Aug 2013 11:35am
I like to listen to haunting sorrowful music, it never makes me feel depressed like some would assume. It makes me "feel" and I succumb to it.
A most beautiful write RT.
A most beautiful write RT.
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re: Re: In Memoriam
15th Aug 2013 12:26pm
Thanks, Magda. I don't plan on living on this island, but it has nice water falls.
Re: In Memoriam
15th Aug 2013 11:44am
A bunch of wilting flowers, that was what came into my mind when I read this. RT.
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