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She Doesn't Get It
It seems
she has given
up her body
for rent
to the cat
and the color TV.
She hardly moves
for hours a day,
and never
really looks
at me.
The days go by
and the hours fade on,
and the only thought
in my head
is what I would do
if she bothered to move
and would signal
us off to the bed.
I've thought and thought
and haven't a clue
as to how to resolve
this whole thing
so all that I know
is that watching her show
as she chills out
just doesn't bring.
The life that I've carved
writing all that I feel
has twisted up all
that I know
and set it on fire
and filled with desire
the lack
that I'm burning to show.
I've set a time limit
and made all the preps
and started to move
that a way
and I as I roll out
I still hear her shout,
"Bring back some milk,
will ya, Ray?"
runningturtle87
she has given
up her body
for rent
to the cat
and the color TV.
She hardly moves
for hours a day,
and never
really looks
at me.
The days go by
and the hours fade on,
and the only thought
in my head
is what I would do
if she bothered to move
and would signal
us off to the bed.
I've thought and thought
and haven't a clue
as to how to resolve
this whole thing
so all that I know
is that watching her show
as she chills out
just doesn't bring.
The life that I've carved
writing all that I feel
has twisted up all
that I know
and set it on fire
and filled with desire
the lack
that I'm burning to show.
I've set a time limit
and made all the preps
and started to move
that a way
and I as I roll out
I still hear her shout,
"Bring back some milk,
will ya, Ray?"
runningturtle87
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 4:06pm
God, I never want to know that.
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 4:21pm
Good poem, sad subject
A good read
A good read
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14th Aug 2013 6:57pm
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Re: She Doesn't Get It
14th Aug 2013 8:28pm
i can relate to this a little bit myself. in that situation i say get the heck outta the relationship and find someone who will give it up. gotta do what you gotta do i say
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re: Re: She Doesn't Get It
14th Aug 2013 9:17pm
Slow motion, guttural,strobe light photography captures the explosion one shred of meaningfulness at a time until the pieces become the new color of the walls of what used to be a defense....
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15th Aug 2013 11:25am
The light fades and colours run together. Staticsss: been there, done that. RT...
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15th Aug 2013 3:08pm
As I have read you over this last year, I know that you know, exactly what I am saying.