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'Tight, White Pants'
She wore
tight, white pants
as if they were painted on
nice and tight,
yes they were
yet to her form the 'fit
belonged...
Nothing that happened
for the rest of that day
could replace the euphoria
my face had displayed...
She wore
tight, white pants
and that caught my attention
switching shaking her intention
in just one glance, perchance
she knew I'd see it too
because before she rounded
the corner, a wink, and kiss she blew...
She wore
tight white pants
that looked as if painted on
and only briefly, I saw her face
but if she gave me the time
of day, I'd joyfully invite
her over to my place...
Simply because of how
she moved that body-
Oohh sweet poetry in motion
so booty-full, so bootlicious...
had me feening for a taste
and instantly, without a hint of disgrace
it quickly brought a smile to my face..!
tight, white pants
as if they were painted on
nice and tight,
yes they were
yet to her form the 'fit
belonged...
Nothing that happened
for the rest of that day
could replace the euphoria
my face had displayed...
She wore
tight, white pants
and that caught my attention
switching shaking her intention
in just one glance, perchance
she knew I'd see it too
because before she rounded
the corner, a wink, and kiss she blew...
She wore
tight white pants
that looked as if painted on
and only briefly, I saw her face
but if she gave me the time
of day, I'd joyfully invite
her over to my place...
Simply because of how
she moved that body-
Oohh sweet poetry in motion
so booty-full, so bootlicious...
had me feening for a taste
and instantly, without a hint of disgrace
it quickly brought a smile to my face..!
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 12th Aug 2013
| Edited 16th Aug 2013
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Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
12th Aug 2013 11:20pm
Hey gonna make you laugh, that's exactly what I have on lol. Nice! :-)
Red
Red
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12th Aug 2013 11:38pm
Omg really!?!? lol wow Must be psycho! lmao
Yea I know it's NOT that but hey I like being silly so shoot me lol... Thankies a ton my dear, appreciate u much :)
Yea I know it's NOT that but hey I like being silly so shoot me lol... Thankies a ton my dear, appreciate u much :)
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13th Aug 2013 00:21am
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12th Aug 2013 11:41pm
Tight, white pants.........with no panties?! That's a vision to behold! :))
#CarryOn
#CarryOn
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re: Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
13th Aug 2013 00:36am
No panties!? lol who said no panties!? lol
Although I'm ok with that lol... And yea thank you my dear, I'm grateful for ur support each n everytime. :)
Although I'm ok with that lol... And yea thank you my dear, I'm grateful for ur support each n everytime. :)
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13th Aug 2013 2:07am
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13th Aug 2013 2:55am
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13th Aug 2013 1:33am
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 2:30am
Glad you found someone to lift your spirits after the previous poem, cher...
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re: Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
13th Aug 2013 3:01am
U give me TOO much credit, this NEVER happened except in my dreams, remember? I'm a writer? I can create outta thin air n many times it Aint based on my actual reality...
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 2:31am
I don't have tight white ones, but.....I do have purple. LOL!!!! Sounds like she had you drooling! :)
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re: Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
13th Aug 2013 3:02am
Lol nah it was just my imagination lol
But I believe I would have been a lil 'warm' lol
Thank u so much my friend :)
But I believe I would have been a lil 'warm' lol
Thank u so much my friend :)
Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
13th Aug 2013 3:17am
awesome scribe..great imagery..fav lines
"tight, white pants
and that caught my attention
switching shaking her intention"
"tight, white pants
and that caught my attention
switching shaking her intention"
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re: Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
13th Aug 2013 3:47am
Lol yea, I've seen this image before but hasn't been a ya here near recent lol... Still thank god for imagination huh? lol thank u my sweetness :)
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 5:59am
Enjoyable read, Poetikmind. Love the last two lines, especially. Imaginative ink, indeed! :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene
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16th Aug 2013 10:54pm
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 7:43am
Day'um ::adds tight white pants to shopping list::
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13th Aug 2013 12:02pm
Omg!! Lol get em! Get em! lol
Thank u my dearest one I'm happy enjoyed this n as always I'm forever grateful for your support :)
Thank u my dearest one I'm happy enjoyed this n as always I'm forever grateful for your support :)
Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
13th Aug 2013 9:50am
I remember my tight white pants/jeans. I still have pictures of me wearing them somewhere lol.
Nicely written Poetikmind.
Nicely written Poetikmind.
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13th Aug 2013 12:04pm
Oh do u now!? Well well well lol
Hot the mind swirling n wondering bout that image lady lol
Thanks a bunch my sweet lady, appreciate u much :)
Hot the mind swirling n wondering bout that image lady lol
Thanks a bunch my sweet lady, appreciate u much :)
Re: 'Tight, White Pants'
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 8:32pm
I really liked this...and you are
so lyrical in your poetry, has a bounce
and rhythm..love these lines:Simply because of how
she moved that body-
Oohh sweet poetry in motion
so booty-full, so bootlicious...
had me feening for a taste
and instantly, without a hint of disgrace
it qiuckly brought a smile to my face..!
so lyrical in your poetry, has a bounce
and rhythm..love these lines:Simply because of how
she moved that body-
Oohh sweet poetry in motion
so booty-full, so bootlicious...
had me feening for a taste
and instantly, without a hint of disgrace
it qiuckly brought a smile to my face..!
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14th Aug 2013 5:05am
Why I thank you for ur sweet words n u know I gotta admit, the
lyrical aspect is most likely becuz when I write, 90% of the time I 'hear' a beat playing in my head lol I know "weirdo!" lol but it's true lol
lyrical aspect is most likely becuz when I write, 90% of the time I 'hear' a beat playing in my head lol I know "weirdo!" lol but it's true lol
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2013 8:24pm
PS...found a typo: it qiuckly brought a smile to my face..!(quickly)
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16th Aug 2013 1:02am
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2013 10:47pm
You're NOT a doofus dear, we all do
it:)
it:)
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16th Aug 2013 10:55pm
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27th Feb 2019 2:48pm
U brought me back to my tight white pants days- have to wear the g underneath. Nice flowy writing....
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