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Hear me Purr
When we're
alone
it's like getting
lost
in a forest
burning from
passion
ignited by
the sparks
when we
touch
If you hear me purr
a lions breath in the wind
when you hear me purr
I'm vulnerable within
Take hold of
you
with a firm
hand
that's right
come here
let me
taste
your affection
make me
feel
the essence
of being a
man
If you hear me purr
my defenses are gone
when you hear me purr
it's my hearts song
alone
it's like getting
lost
in a forest
burning from
passion
ignited by
the sparks
when we
touch
If you hear me purr
a lions breath in the wind
when you hear me purr
I'm vulnerable within
Take hold of
you
with a firm
hand
that's right
come here
let me
taste
your affection
make me
feel
the essence
of being a
man
If you hear me purr
my defenses are gone
when you hear me purr
it's my hearts song
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 12th Aug 2013
| Edited 13th Aug 2013
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Re: Hear me Purr
12th Aug 2013 9:27pm
it's very unusual to read the word 'purr'
obviously from a cat...albeit in this case a very BIG (loin) cat
But I 'get' it in the context it's used here... Very nicely penned dude!
obviously from a cat...albeit in this case a very BIG (loin) cat
But I 'get' it in the context it's used here... Very nicely penned dude!
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Re: Hear me Purr
Well,I have a fairly deep voice,and have been known to make a purr'type' sound in certain intimate moments sometimes.Which was the inspiration for the write.
Thanks for reading,and your kind words...
Thanks for reading,and your kind words...
Re: Hear me Purr
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 7:34am
"let me taste your affection"
^^ oh, I love that line.
Such a passionate piece Ed, an absolute sensual feast for the senses with beautiful visuals.
^^ oh, I love that line.
Such a passionate piece Ed, an absolute sensual feast for the senses with beautiful visuals.

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Re: Hear me Purr
13th Aug 2013 7:39am
Thank you Mia...
Glad you enjoyed.This has been sitting in my notepad mess for awhile.Figured I'd put it out there.
Glad you enjoyed.This has been sitting in my notepad mess for awhile.Figured I'd put it out there.
Re: Hear me Purr
16th Aug 2013 10:33am
re: Re: Hear me Purr
16th Aug 2013 11:24am
Re: Hear me Purr
By the Gods!
Pardon me, my mind was just blown.
From the start to the end, was totally beautiful and the rhyming pattern utterly superb!
Excellent Write Ed... such passion in such little words!
Darker
Pardon me, my mind was just blown.
From the start to the end, was totally beautiful and the rhyming pattern utterly superb!
Excellent Write Ed... such passion in such little words!
Darker
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