unremarked

A very sad poem,
that describes
a state we have
all experienced.
Excellent write, D.

A bit wordy, perhaps? I've been
reading Dickens again and much
as I love him he does go on...
thanks, jag

Your have used words
so sparingly. I think
you should allow yourself
this one indulgence.

too sad but so true....

Oh, thanks hiba, I really
appreciate that you took
the time to read it :)

oftentimes i think




we are all going to be




lost voices




in the


"grand scheme of things..."


but this is a beutiful depiction of that




on a more intricate, intimate scale.

which is worse, I wonder...
to be barely noticed at the
time, or to be quckly forgotten
shortly afterwards?

Thanks very much, Patrick..:)