It's a game

Such a deep vision. Thank you, Theo!

It's a nice poem...I'll
have to think about
it and that surely makes
it a good one, too :)

Don't know about poem, but you're surely smart man if it makes you think:) I appreciate your words, Dartford!

Our brains will tear us apart and tell us to escape, but it is sometimes better to stay, and feel the rain. Marvelous

Kind of an inner battle.

Thank you, Shady!

This is my favourite style when it comes to writing because most poets sound like they're trying to deliberately confuse the reader or maybe it's too intellectual or cryptic for my limited comprehension but this goes right to the core of me and rips it.Thoroughly enjoyed.NICE ONE.

Thank You:) I like this style too, because of two reasons: I can't write a longer poem :) , and I guess, sometimes, the less words you use, the wider spectrum of things you can tell about, the more different things reader can associate it with.

I receive a lot of pleasure reading your poetry too, Viwe

This poem works on several levels
and is worth pondering.

I'm trying to learn from you, Jagracia:)

Whatever I have to offer,
I offer freely.
thanks.
Jaime