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The beating of two hearts in an elevator [on the axis of heaven and hell]

   
She presses  
STOP  
bouncing in strange tension  
strung up in this banal space  
she looks at me    
[blank]  
you got something to say?  
she replies with a sharp stinging jab  
to my mouth  
I didn’t see it coming  
she squats  
back against the wall  
pissing lust  
her licking smile  
dragging the animal  
out from my ribcage  
   
   
blood drips  
down the back of my throat  
churning my guts into an iron fist  
choking her gasping breath  
breaking every halo  
that snaps from my shoulder  
until she smiles through my mess  
[framed] in my macabre portrait  
she kisses [Christ]  
flowing from my lips    
smearing flesh  
over bulletproof pane  
senseless passion  
hanging somewhere  
between  
heaven and hell.
Author's Note
This poem was inspired by the Norwegian horror film "Naboer". It was one hell of a twisted film, with one scene being so unsettling I turned off my tv. Somehow this poem emerged from the darkside... but only watched the film in its entirety years later.
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