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Re: Haiku XX
8th Aug 2013 9:44pm
Yes, the violin can be
woeful when played in
the minor keys. The cello,
also can be a sad instrument.
This haiku reminds me of the film,
"The Red Violin." Very nice poem, Chi.
woeful when played in
the minor keys. The cello,
also can be a sad instrument.
This haiku reminds me of the film,
"The Red Violin." Very nice poem, Chi.
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re: Re: Haiku XX
Ah! Thanks for telling me about the film. Haven't watched it yet ... Thank you for your lovely (and informative) comment, J.!
Re: Haiku XX
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 10:21pm
Beautiful expression in this lovely haiku, Iris. Love the last line, in particular. Well done! :-) xo
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene

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I was thinking about you and your piano, too, when crafting it, Carlene :-). One of my favourite instruments is the violine. As I might have told you before I love moors and when taking pictures there I'm always reminded of my old dog who always accompanied me on my phototours as long as he was alive. When I'm in the moor nowadays, I miss him so much and yes - to be able to listen to a violin's lullaby there - just for him and his spirit - would be so nice. Thanks for your lovely comment, Carlene!
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 00:02am
A lovely comment, Iris. I love the idea of your beloved dog accompanying you on your phototours. I, too, miss my dog so much. I feel inspired by you to take out my violin - dust it off - and replace one of its worn strings. It has been far too many years since I played. It must be feeling lonely in its case. lol Have a great day, my friend! :-)
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene

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Re: Haiku XX
9th Aug 2013 1:50pm
Yea a violin is one of my top five fav. Instruments it does
Have that quality bout it!! awesome haiku!
Have that quality bout it!! awesome haiku!
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9th Aug 2013 7:34pm
Re: Haiku XX
Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 7:55pm
AH, romance...thats my kind of tune there, Chiyo!
Great words, I thought of our beloved Grieg and Ole Bull, a local Violinist here....
Great words, I thought of our beloved Grieg and Ole Bull, a local Violinist here....

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re: Re: Haiku XX
9th Aug 2013 10:37pm
I love Grieg although his pieces are often melancholic. The Valse Triste is my absolute favourite! Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a nice a comment, Mourganna!
Re: Haiku XX
18th Aug 2013 1:42am
your little poem makes music, & makes me happy to hear the sound that makes me sad. what more can a poem do?...
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2nd Oct 2013 8:47am
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