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Full Power
I can hear a whisper
before it is shared.
My powers let me see
through walls and thoughts.
I can heal hurts
with a warm touch.
Bring your misery to me
and I'll tear it, burn it,
pull you from the ashes.
My powers I pass to you;
the future conquered, your turn
to be Mother, to reach core love.
Entered in Gigi's comp under topic of Super Powers
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Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 11:20am
I had the biggest grin on my face as soon as I read the first 2 lines. It was a huge comp, but for me, Full Power was the clear winner. A super yummy mummy!!!
Awesome write Atakti.
Awesome write Atakti.
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re: Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 2:55pm
Re: Full Power
Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 2:11pm
excellent ataki!

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Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 2:46pm
Within each of us lies the potential for that 'super-power'...to be able to reach out to others--'feeling' their emotions, and being able to offer compassion and support.All we need to do, is open our minds......and our hearts.
This piece creatively conveys this message to your readers.
Inked with Insight--Indeed! :))
This piece creatively conveys this message to your readers.
Inked with Insight--Indeed! :))
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re: Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 2:58pm
I'm pleased you interpreted it as such, Dark Enchantress. Thank you for stopping by.
Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 3:40pm
Loved it you where my second fav but for some reason I couldn't give you second place nor indie third! Idk why so I just went with the next two! I really like this and Ty for entering
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re: Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 9:02pm
Comp was a biggie, that's for sure! It was fun though.
Thanks for your words, Gigi fish xx
Thanks for your words, Gigi fish xx
Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 7:54pm
Healing another's hurt sounds like a very sweet power!
Come heal me mommy! lol... Short but truly outstanding ink :)
Come heal me mommy! lol... Short but truly outstanding ink :)
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re: Re: Full Power
7th Aug 2013 10:11pm
Re: Full Power
8th Aug 2013 4:04am
I can heal hurts with a warm touch...... You made me miss my mommy! :)
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Re: Full Power
8th Aug 2013 10:29am
It comes so naturally. You portrayed it so well.
Great write Atakti. All the best in the comp. :)
Great write Atakti. All the best in the comp. :)
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Re: Full Power
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Aug 2013 4:15am
8th Aug 2013 11:15pm
I think this piece speaks to your character, when endowed with super powers your instincts are to heal and invoke motherly nurturing images into the mind. So nice! Mike

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re: Re: Full Power
9th Aug 2013 10:05pm
Re: Full Power
10th Aug 2013 2:39am