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Happy Haiku
Bright white light inside
Going threw life reaching new highs
Happiness resides
Written by a true Meenjataka
Going threw life reaching new highs
Happiness resides
Written by a true Meenjataka
Published 5th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 6:44am
Nice haiku. Opening line made me smile, we should all be full of such pure energy.
L2, "threw" should be "through".
L2, "threw" should be "through".
12th Sep 2013 6:59am
Ahhhh oops lol I didn't even notice that hahaha thanks wish I could edit it so I don't look like a dumb dumb hehe
