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The Split In Me
I walk in with sex on the brain
not diminished by the sight of you
dressed to the nines for this first encounter
my restraint commands my deeds
The attraction on my part isn't hard to ascertain
the vibe is direct and clear
but embedded is a nature of reserve
my head goes to lustville but my heart is cautious
With conversation you perceive that despite my bark
something more than a fuck and split is my agenda
to my surprise you are open to intimacy
a night of first impressions leads to unexpected joy
As the day breaks and we are still linked
what a difference comes to the forefront
for while I walked in quashing animal impulses
I will leave hopeful of something beyond....
not diminished by the sight of you
dressed to the nines for this first encounter
my restraint commands my deeds
The attraction on my part isn't hard to ascertain
the vibe is direct and clear
but embedded is a nature of reserve
my head goes to lustville but my heart is cautious
With conversation you perceive that despite my bark
something more than a fuck and split is my agenda
to my surprise you are open to intimacy
a night of first impressions leads to unexpected joy
As the day breaks and we are still linked
what a difference comes to the forefront
for while I walked in quashing animal impulses
I will leave hopeful of something beyond....
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Re: The Split In Me
5th Aug 2013 6:39am
You're just a sensual lion, aren't you?! Xo
Beautiful and oh so sexy....
Beautiful and oh so sexy....
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re: Re: The Split In Me
5th Aug 2013 6:41am
never been called a lion before but it sounds okay to me! Thanks for the kind words
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5th Aug 2013 6:58am
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 9:56am
Enjoyed this write jazz manor!
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5th Aug 2013 11:20am
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5th Aug 2013 3:22pm
You did it yet again---gave a concise definition to a subject that has many facets. Thanks for the read!
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2013 1:46am
What a hot write! Slow, sensual then flat out sexy. :)
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9th Aug 2013 1:52am
Re: The Split In Me
10th Aug 2013 4:14pm
Seems like you favor the yin to my yang in these matters..It was lovely....this made me feel almost wistful..
"I will leave hopeful of something beyond"
"I will leave hopeful of something beyond"
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re: Re: The Split In Me
10th Aug 2013 9:06pm
Umm you might have to explain me being "the yin". Are we talking about perspectives on romance? Life in general?
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10th Aug 2013 11:40pm
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24th Aug 2013 7:39am
well done it shows your cautious side as well and you passions and desires if i may assume so
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24th Aug 2013 8:59am
Laugh...when people ask the first thing I look for in a female, I typically say, "whether or not she has on a wedding ring".
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25th Aug 2013 5:08am
then dont look at my hands!!! i have a ring on each finger and i dont have a husband!! and every one of them has a story to tell
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