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Is To Live Here In Hell?

At later date it may translate to something of substance
meaning with honorable motive and and goal
but first impulse really lacks any virtue
devoid of any touch of soul
for that first impression is about animal callings
the beast wanting to devour it's prey
claiming the curves of the body
the ebbs and flows of the physique at play
pure pleasure seeker culminated in male release
oblivious to danger signs
primal command not impeded in the least
not worried with the consequences
or the guilt that may be witnessed after the fact
conquest felt great in the moment
but is the conscience still intact?
how it displays the imperfections
some say that were embedded from Eden's events
if we stay on lust's path
is hell where we unrepentant sinners shall be sent
or does such a place exist only in the recesses of the human mind
such a question has broader implications
for what we do with our limited time




Based On Sting's song, "Consider Me Gone"
JAZZMANOR
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