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keeping me afloat
It feels like I can breathe each breath so far away, if I don't let you go you will drowned with me. so I close my eyes and say one last goodbye and released you my life preserver down into darkness I take one last breath the love I have for you will never fade you're my starlight angel no one can take away.
Published 4th Aug 2013
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4th Aug 2013 8:46pm
This made me cry. I'm at a loss for words and overwhelmed with emotion. When it comes to writing I believe that's a good thing.
