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the neophyte must take novice at this time
respite,
in all the things
running through his mind
don't try
and cajole me
with those eyes.
the child straggling behind it's mother
begs for
respite,
this wasn't ever ecclesiastical
in spite.
in all the things
running through his mind
don't try
and cajole me
with those eyes.
the child straggling behind it's mother
begs for
respite,
this wasn't ever ecclesiastical
in spite.
Published 27th Jul 2013
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27th Jul 2013 5:50pm
you made me need to use a dictionary- I like that. You make many awkward words sound poetic.
27th Jul 2013 6:47pm
This was written in an very witty way, Lacey.
And it does have meaning.
Good job... Pan
And it does have meaning.
Good job... Pan
27th Jul 2013 6:49pm
Anonymous
29th Jul 2013 2:22pm
Seems like an isight from Lacey of Spacey!
I really love your writes, every time its a surprise.....This one has a profound feeling to it, deep!
I really love your writes, every time its a surprise.....This one has a profound feeling to it, deep!
