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Spider Web Veil
She wears a spider web veil
Kissed with tear drops like the
Morning dew
The sun shines on her face and
Gives her stained cheeks some
Light
She welcomes the warmth of
A new day filled with new hope
Lifting her veil
With help from the dancing wind
The web she wore drifts skyward
And she smiles
Kissed with tear drops like the
Morning dew
The sun shines on her face and
Gives her stained cheeks some
Light
She welcomes the warmth of
A new day filled with new hope
Lifting her veil
With help from the dancing wind
The web she wore drifts skyward
And she smiles
Published 27th Jul 2013
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27th Jul 2013 9:57am
27th Jul 2013 10:07am
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 11:25am
Nice start tl....strider
27th Jul 2013 12:16pm
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27th Jul 2013 8:43pm
27th Jul 2013 8:39pm
She welcomes the warmth of
A new day filled with new hope
here's to new hope!!
what a little cutie in your profile pic!!
A new day filled with new hope
here's to new hope!!
what a little cutie in your profile pic!!
27th Jul 2013 8:44pm
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 11:38pm
The imagery is gorgeous, luminescent even :) I picture so vividly the tears clinging to the strands of silk. Well done! Brava Poeta!
27th Jul 2013 11:45pm
Thank you darling...(I said that in my most sexy vampire voice ever)..... ;-)
Anonymous
30th Jul 2013 4:19am
I heard every word ;)
29th Jul 2013 3:36pm
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29th Jul 2013 7:27pm
29th Jul 2013 8:15pm
Thank you vman...I love Tim Burton's creative genius! Disney, well he was a bit of a liar(prince charming...happy every after...true love,etc...etc...) I still watched and sang every disney movie though... ;)
