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Her Love Out To Sea~His Love On Land
She counts down the days
when she can see him again
hoping time really does fly
Just like her momma says
A love story so true with
white lace trimmed on
the edge of their voices
Her smile lights up the room
Miles and miles of earth
in between them she blows
him a kiss and the wind delivers
Over salty sea waters he catches it
Apart but complete they whisper
their love while holding their
hands on their hearts
She waits for him to come home
Not knowing when she will
hear from him again she holds
on to his last message and rereads it
Gently she kisses her phone
He sends a quick hello babe
I miss you very much and I
love you forever more
With a twinkle in her eyes it's a great day
when she can see him again
hoping time really does fly
Just like her momma says
A love story so true with
white lace trimmed on
the edge of their voices
Her smile lights up the room
Miles and miles of earth
in between them she blows
him a kiss and the wind delivers
Over salty sea waters he catches it
Apart but complete they whisper
their love while holding their
hands on their hearts
She waits for him to come home
Not knowing when she will
hear from him again she holds
on to his last message and rereads it
Gently she kisses her phone
He sends a quick hello babe
I miss you very much and I
love you forever more
With a twinkle in her eyes it's a great day
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26th Jul 2013 10:08pm
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26th Jul 2013 10:17pm
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 10:08pm
Tommie this is a beautifully written very romantic piece. This stanza is especially striking, for me at least :)
"A love story so true with
white lace trimmed on
the edge of their voices"
Well damn it it should be for everyone else too :D
"A love story so true with
white lace trimmed on
the edge of their voices"
Well damn it it should be for everyone else too :D
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26th Jul 2013 10:16pm
Sometimes it happens sometimes it don't! I believe in love, for other people...I had it, never want it again!This is for my girl...it makes my heart happy knowing she's in love with an
amazing young man!
Thank you lerdgoin... ;)
amazing young man!
Thank you lerdgoin... ;)
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 10:19pm
Ah come on...DON'T GIVE UP ON LOVE...you're much too young girl :)
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26th Jul 2013 10:22pm
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 11:26pm
What you think you can ride for free? There are no free rides...you know that ;)
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26th Jul 2013 11:31pm
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 11:08pm
nice flow and feeling tl...
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26th Jul 2013 11:30pm
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27th Jul 2013 8:56am
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27th Jul 2013 9:00am
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27th Jul 2013 9:12am
An updated version from the days she would have been kissing a letter. Brings that kind of long distance romance into the 21st century. So true, I imagine of many service marriages during voyages or battle tours.
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