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We can be Giants Too...
We could be giants too
if we stop reachin' for that material 'thing'
n' gain more insight from our past
maybe we're the youth,
promised to be the future but they say, " we're just not right"
I say maybe it's the truth as it appears
yet it's not too late to begin reachin' for the light
You could be giants
in a world turned so sad, selfish, vile infested n' blue
why not seek the knowledge,
then ingest the smoke of wisdom puffed n' passed onto you?
We could be giants
n' further widen a new trend along our way
We could be giants too...
gotta first be cleansed of this morality-as-eyes-see, ill-will decay
I believe you will be giants
feastin' on a world filled of love n' compassion for the other man
You can be giants
if you're real n' spillin' positivity's change all across the motherland
You mother's... earthed the flowers, they water so they'll ever grow
You could be giants
it was gifted from God in your DNA so let flourish...n the shine show
We could could be giants too
it's that internal voice singing as a child in me
Yea, they can be giants
I think proudly as I stare at my beautiful child...
There's a giant in her I see!
if we stop reachin' for that material 'thing'
n' gain more insight from our past
maybe we're the youth,
promised to be the future but they say, " we're just not right"
I say maybe it's the truth as it appears
yet it's not too late to begin reachin' for the light
You could be giants
in a world turned so sad, selfish, vile infested n' blue
why not seek the knowledge,
then ingest the smoke of wisdom puffed n' passed onto you?
We could be giants
n' further widen a new trend along our way
We could be giants too...
gotta first be cleansed of this morality-as-eyes-see, ill-will decay
I believe you will be giants
feastin' on a world filled of love n' compassion for the other man
You can be giants
if you're real n' spillin' positivity's change all across the motherland
You mother's... earthed the flowers, they water so they'll ever grow
You could be giants
it was gifted from God in your DNA so let flourish...n the shine show
We could could be giants too
it's that internal voice singing as a child in me
Yea, they can be giants
I think proudly as I stare at my beautiful child...
There's a giant in her I see!
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26th Jul 2013 1:19am
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26th Jul 2013 1:31am
Aaaawww c'mere... Mmmmmmmmmmaaahhh big hugs to you! thank you my dear sweetheart, I truly appreciate it :)
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 2:29am
Beautiful, passionate write, Poetikmind. Straight from the heart to the reader! Powerful delivery. Loved the poem! :)
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene
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26th Jul 2013 4:10am
Thank u my dear friend, u touched my heart with ur sweet words...grateful for u always :)
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 3:06am
This is so beautifully written, melted my heart. :)
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26th Jul 2013 4:15am
Thank u sweetie I'm happy you enjoyed this ink
n I'm grateful as well for ur support :)
n I'm grateful as well for ur support :)
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 3:20am
very inspirational and insightful my dude..full of poetic wizdom!!
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 3:23am
Great write, Poetik.
Words of wisdom for the nation and
the world when they/we need it.
Thank You
Words of wisdom for the nation and
the world when they/we need it.
Thank You
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 7:19am
You always write with wisdom and love
got to love that
got to love that
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7th Aug 2013 9:13pm
I'm so sorry I'm just seeing this my friend :( ur so sweet to say that n I'm very grateful... Thank u so much! :)
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 3:51am
Just what i needed a beautiful uplifting read, wonderful write hun :) x
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 5:33am
Positively loving and hopeful poem, cher. And your daughter doesn't just have "Your mother's... earthed the flowers, they water so they'll ever grow" - she has you, too.
And I believe she will be a giant.
And I believe she will be a giant.
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26th Jul 2013 11:08am
Ur comment touches my heart... Thank you my sweetness :) so grateful I am for your support :)
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26th Jul 2013 11:54am
Dang Poe, you were having a deep serious thought while sitting on your porcelain throne when you wrote this one. I do believe you might have blown a few fuses hahaha OK I'll be serious now: This is a profound fundamental truth needs to be heard and heeded, well done, ol wise one!
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26th Jul 2013 12:20pm
Lmao my porcelain throne huh? ur so wrong for that! lol
But I will overlook that shot, still it may come back at u unexpectly lol thank you my dear, truly appreciate ur wonderful n unyielding support of my ink :)
But I will overlook that shot, still it may come back at u unexpectly lol thank you my dear, truly appreciate ur wonderful n unyielding support of my ink :)
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26th Jul 2013 3:38pm
Love it,wonderful words...plant the seeds and watch them grow and touch the sky.
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Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 4:10pm
Beautifully put, and insightfully
written. Tarnished by the world
around us, but we, as humans can
be a different way...so powerful
and great this is my friend, and
excellent job my friend with this
one:)
written. Tarnished by the world
around us, but we, as humans can
be a different way...so powerful
and great this is my friend, and
excellent job my friend with this
one:)
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