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They are Everything
The voices inside my head
they don’t stop, they don’t want me dead
they wont let me go into eternal peace
wont let me slip into sleep
they want to keep me trapped
here with them, they are everywhere
and i realize that they are everything
i am trapped here with my voices
for all eternity
they don’t stop, they don’t want me dead
they wont let me go into eternal peace
wont let me slip into sleep
they want to keep me trapped
here with them, they are everywhere
and i realize that they are everything
i am trapped here with my voices
for all eternity
Published 23rd Jul 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 8:48pm
I looked up your profile and you like Stephen King. He dealt with an imminent sense of losing his mind by writing. As for voices in your head, are they telling you to do anything.....
Voices in your head - schizophrenia, bipolar disorder, or everybody has some voices...especially writers.....
You have done a good thing by writing
a poem about this......
Voices in your head - schizophrenia, bipolar disorder, or everybody has some voices...especially writers.....
You have done a good thing by writing
a poem about this......
23rd Jul 2013 9:07pm
I show signs of having a mild bipolar disorder. Writing helps me with it. Though i'm not crazy, though me saying that i am not doesnt put me in the clear. Though if i said i were, then i wouldnt be, because crazy people dont know that they are crazy, right?
25th Jul 2013 4:08pm
lol crazy people do know but they choose not to believe it, i have bi polar myself and major depressive disorder i also self harm so i understand this voices in my head situation. but honestly it makes people better writers. never second guess yourself when a poem comes to mind. put it on paper first and go from there. i liked this
25th Jul 2013 4:20pm
