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JUST ANOTHER BIG-GAME BREAKFAST (II) (Breakfast at the 'Coast Inn' - ( a.k.a. - 'The Boom-Boom Room'; 19
beneath invisible microscopes
neurotic red eyes feel
as fried eggs silently spill
in a roomful of
post sleepless nights
where last nights
hopeful intentions
suggestive poses
and drunken stares
have now returned to pursue
some morning after social vigil
freshly washed
though somewhat
still haggard
hangovers from last night
now gather together
again this morning
to hazard this new day here
in cross eyed attendance
of this unspoken morning report
where i too am here
just as i was
late last night
hung over here now as well
seeking my own
partial resurrection
in this local rituals
weekend morning after
popular breakfast spot
while patiently awaiting
my waitress to come take my order
i begin my morning
and bide my time
by mostly pretending to read
the morning paper
even after my breakfast arrives
while actually in truth
simultaneously
discreetly and covertly eves dropping
in on scattered fragments
of random conversations
peripherally going on
everywhere here all around me
while catching little eye games
of hide and seek
amongst whispers of
who went home
with who last night
and who did not at all
alone myself
feeling slightly lost
here in the dense foliage
of everyones coffee talk
i suavely select marmalade
for my toast
while casually trying to blend in
with a large plant in the corner
beside me
when suddenly
a stale morning after
drag queen waitress
squirms by
with hips a wiggle
and wrists a sway
as she hisses at me
in her campy passing
eat you savage
momentarily breaking me
out of my trance like spell
though still in a slightly
hungover cloudy stupor
foiling my previous subtle cover
as a discreet incognito
neutral observer
and make believe secret reporter
when suddenly
all eyes are upon me
here in this gossipy room
where all i can hear
in its currents of whispers
are slithering elongations
of lisping esses
amid the screeching
background sounds
which sound like
fingernails drug across
chalkboard like
ear piercing scrapings
from forks against plates
and the staccato clinking
of cups and glasses
where all i can smell
in the air hanging everywhere
here around me
aside from the warm comforting
nostalgic sobering aroma
of fresh cooked eggs
bacon toast and freshly brewed coffee
is the stagnant stench
of last nights cigarette smoke
still stubbornly hanging
thick in the air
like an unseen
precancerous ghost
yet where still here even now
quick eye glances
cruisy and judging
dart slyly and telling
from table to table
from patron to patron
from patrons to waiters
and back from waiters
to patrons again
for so early in the morning
i m still somewhat taken aback
and surprised to discover
that it s still such a cruisy
public scene in here
then realizing my hangovers
not getting much better
i decide it s time
for me to leave
noting in my final assessment
that for those who didnt
get enough of this last night
then this definitely
looks like
the place to be
but if youre in the mood
for a nice quiet breakfast
then don t even come in
and take a seat
for despite it s apparent popularity
as the hottest place to go to eat
on saturday and sunday
weekend mornings
here in laguna beach
it s obvious to me now
that the real special of the day here
isn t even on the menu
just take a good long look
and sniff around
and soon enough you ll see
that in truth it s really
not much more than just another
typically hung over
somewhat seedy
sunday morning after
desperately insatiable
big game breakfast
especially for all those
still hungry hunters
who ended up going home
empty handed
and alone
from their futile quests last night
who ve returned here
now again today
in hopes of having
some better stroke of potential luck
while eating their breakfast
at possibly finding
someone else there
like themselves
whom they can get to go
back home with them
like take out without the box
in hopes of somehow compensating
their previously unsuccessful
apparent lack
of such success
from the prior night before
but even then
even if they should score
the simple fact remains the same
no matter how you shake it
it s still nonetheless
just another
big game breakfast
all the
same
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