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CARPATHIAN TWILIGHT
Nervous breaths of foamy mouths
rushing through the forest trees
As the twilight tries to keep
the howling pack of wolves behind
The sound of violins ascents
propel the twirling of the dress
as salty pearls find their way
along curved panting breasts
The hunger rises with the flames
of fires that suggest salvation
In this night where full circle
clouds the judgement of the mind
Opening the window to uncertainty
Seduced by hungry sighs and glances
the flee is nothing but a pale attempt
to eagerly surrender to her kind
Take me to your world...
rushing through the forest trees
As the twilight tries to keep
the howling pack of wolves behind
The sound of violins ascents
propel the twirling of the dress
as salty pearls find their way
along curved panting breasts
The hunger rises with the flames
of fires that suggest salvation
In this night where full circle
clouds the judgement of the mind
Opening the window to uncertainty
Seduced by hungry sighs and glances
the flee is nothing but a pale attempt
to eagerly surrender to her kind
Take me to your world...
Published 23rd Jul 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 7:36am
You've taken us...
Dangerous desires, cher. Well written.
Dangerous desires, cher. Well written.
26th Jul 2013 7:42pm
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 9:17am
Beautifully seductive write....
Gothic poetry is always a joy to read!
Gothic poetry is always a joy to read!
26th Jul 2013 7:43pm
I was actually there, in the Carpathian hills. They simply took me... Thank you!
23rd Jul 2013 9:36am
26th Jul 2013 7:46pm
25th Jul 2013 8:23pm
"seduced by hungry sighs and glances"
mmmmmm....
"take me I'm yours"
...indeed I shall.
PEN ON!!!!
mmmmmm....
"take me I'm yours"
...indeed I shall.
PEN ON!!!!
26th Jul 2013 7:47pm
Dark... Compelling! Another full moon night....yet again, the cursed cycle repeats...
A unique, creative twist to this popular horror theme.....this time, a more w i l l i n g victim--"...The flee is nothing but a pale attempt/to eagerly surrender to her kind...."
( But-- then again--we can't really help who we fall in love with....can we???? )
Truly enjoyed this piece! i have added it to my Reading List of poems to be read, and appreciated, in deepest midnight :)
More from your 'darker side'--please! Well Penned!!
A unique, creative twist to this popular horror theme.....this time, a more w i l l i n g victim--"...The flee is nothing but a pale attempt/to eagerly surrender to her kind...."
( But-- then again--we can't really help who we fall in love with....can we???? )
Truly enjoyed this piece! i have added it to my Reading List of poems to be read, and appreciated, in deepest midnight :)
More from your 'darker side'--please! Well Penned!!
26th Jul 2013 7:50pm
Thanks love! Wonderful to read your thoughts on my poem. The full moon night has a beauty and turn on that I simply cannot ignore...
