Four Days

This felt as a circle Atakti--cryptic, and I dig it!!! I had been wondering where Your writes were (no doubt on some thread i'll rarely venture:)-Glad to see one!!!

I didn't mean for it to be so cryptic. I'll tell you this for nothing, though. I deliberately chose the Dark category because this is one of those times that it annoys me when another category would give too much away.

Like I'm doing now... LOL.

Thanks for stopping by, Soul.

Irrational wishes???  Time to meet need!!!!

I see the wise Turtle gets it...

:)

Nice one ataki.... strider!

Thank you.

:)

Sometimes it is worth taking the leap. A chance we need to take.

If I am reading this right that is lol.

Great write Atakti.

Yes, M, you are reading this right! Our fears can be just as painful as the leap, yet we still hesitate.

Thank you for your thoughts.

if i read this enough number of times it'll probably inspire a darker version :P
the taste of fire... how wonderful!

13, you're too kind, thank you.

PS I'll be on the lookout for the darker version....
;)

i better get crackin then :D

This has left me with a lot of questions. What is this a abyss? Is this a wish? Is this want? Is this I need? Is this a person?It's got me thinking hard and that's what a good poem does. Let us know how the leap went.

I'm stoked to see all the thoughts on my scribblings. Thank you, Puppy.

Epic xoxo

Aww, thanks, Gigi boo.

Thanks for the yummy comments!

:)

I identify with this Atakti. For me dreams can be dismissed too easily, I fear myself more than my dreams, if that makes sense. (actually that sounds like I've been to one of those amped motivational speakers). Fuck it... it's a cool poem.

I really like how you challenge the reader, there is a lot to think about in each of your pieces. I even learnt what the gods eat when they get the munchies.

Aww, thanks Case, you're too kind.


:)

 I love this -- not a syllable wasted --
 
 This piece evoked Webern`s music to me --

 expecially in it`s density and completeness...

Thank you drivelicious, appreciate it.

Webern, huh? Interesting...