pain

haha good one man...

Thanks, Fen :)

Through understatement this poem makes it point. We all feel the disappointment of not getting that call or text. Poignant, succinct, terse, and true. Another successful effort.

Thanks, Jag, I just thought I liked
the idea of the phone not ringing
being like my poems, it's more
about the silence than the words..

With only five words you managed to capture an emotion beautifully. Great job!

Thanks very much :)

Damn, knew I forgot to do something.

Joking aside, you've said so much in so few words and captured emotions that many need paragraphs to express.

Thanks for the really
nice comment!

At first, i wondered 'wheres the rest?'.. then i read it again, and then again one more time. Then i realized ' oohhh, ok!' Lol.. short and sweet.  Nice..

Oh, thanks!