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The Wand
The Wand
I rode the bus they pointed at
The cheese bus
The little one
My teacher said I could get
Gold stars
if I behaved
I didn't get many
One day while I was in the corner
Time out, again
She gave me a pencil
Yellow No. 2
and said
It's a wand
Write what you feel
I use my wand here now
I like it because I get
Gold stars
When I don't behave
Lots of yellow here too
Same kind of bus I guess
Small
Special
Presented in the YELLOW challenge hosted by anna_grin
I rode the bus they pointed at
The cheese bus
The little one
My teacher said I could get
Gold stars
if I behaved
I didn't get many
One day while I was in the corner
Time out, again
She gave me a pencil
Yellow No. 2
and said
It's a wand
Write what you feel
I use my wand here now
I like it because I get
Gold stars
When I don't behave
Lots of yellow here too
Same kind of bus I guess
Small
Special
Presented in the YELLOW challenge hosted by anna_grin
Published 17th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 3:32pm
LobodeSanPedro,
Time is the only thing short....not the bus. Power to the Yellow! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Time is the only thing short....not the bus. Power to the Yellow! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
17th Jul 2013 8:57pm
Thanks for the read tornado, and you're right this precious chaotic thing is all too short ... Better to enjoy it rather than damn it.
LSP
LSP
17th Jul 2013 4:04pm
17th Jul 2013 4:09pm
That being said I liked your poem you used your words wisely and in a very consise way bringing us all back to THAT corner.
17th Jul 2013 9:04pm
Thank you for the read catlady and more importantly your feedback. Strange thing is - once we become adults "that corner" a place of solitude and escape from all, is one of the things we crave most.
LSP
LSP
18th Jul 2013 3:42am
18th Jul 2013 7:19am
Thanks for the feedback Rain ... This was largely a reflective piece - I was a bit of a hot mess early on in school lol ... then I thought about all the yellow in school ... Pencils & stars; as well as the banners here - with black lettering - just like the buses.
LSP
LSP
