Only After

Mutual divestments....................

Thanks for reading Chris ;)

I enjoyed the way you wrote this poem:
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One quiet liar to another,
slip of our red hot tongues
sharp like thistles
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above was wonderful

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Thorny twigs prick the inside
of our loneliness, letting our
sweet scents flow
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Masterful use of words, language
Demonstrates wonderful wordcrafting
Well penned
Kitty

Thank you Kitty ;)

Thanks Gabriel ;)

Ahh, the things we do to allow
ourselves to feel alive.


"Thorny twigs prick the inside
of our loneliness, letting our
sweet scents flow"            


 Nice intimate inflection, Tommie... Pan

Thanks Pan :)

Tommie, this is such a well developed piece. Bravisima Poeta! ;) What I like about it is it causes the reader to apply the words to their own experience making it personal for all who read it. I love this stanza especially:
"Thorny twigs prick the inside
of our loneliness, letting our
sweet scents flow"

And you used my favorite word..."entwined" ;)
 
Thank you!

Thank you so much lerdgoin ;))

its easy to get entwined with you....and your writing hahahah...

Thanks Vman ;)

Just incredible ... Seamless.

LSP

Much appreciated LSP :)

Enough said already tl...nice write!

Thank you S ;)