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No Sleep
Eyes don't want to stay open
I'm fighting the magnet
that's pulling me back to bed
yeah, that bed looks good,
the back of my eyelids look
even better,
no rest for the wicked,
duty calls,
I'll sleep when I'm dead
I'm fighting the magnet
that's pulling me back to bed
yeah, that bed looks good,
the back of my eyelids look
even better,
no rest for the wicked,
duty calls,
I'll sleep when I'm dead
Published 16th Jul 2013
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16th Jul 2013 5:19am
17th Jul 2013 3:50am
16th Jul 2013 5:20am
17th Jul 2013 3:51am
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 6:11am
Well if that's when you plan on sleeping may you stay awake forever:)
17th Jul 2013 3:51am
Catching line:
"That bed looks good."
Recited, the poem could titillate if you pregnantly pause after "That" - then abruptly resume "bed looks good" having misled the listener into thinking you were about to say "man" or "dude".
(Can visualise the pic accompanying your poem Bed.)
"That bed looks good."
Recited, the poem could titillate if you pregnantly pause after "That" - then abruptly resume "bed looks good" having misled the listener into thinking you were about to say "man" or "dude".
(Can visualise the pic accompanying your poem Bed.)
17th Jul 2013 3:52am
16th Jul 2013 7:37am
no you won't hahaha I just woke up had a low sugar I was going to die decided a bag of chips and a couple of turkey patties was a better choice....as Madonna says in this video....
Not my time to go...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2bLhcDmZyg
Not my time to go...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B2bLhcDmZyg
17th Jul 2013 3:53am
Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 2:53am
Can relate tl!!!
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