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From A Distance
We love with a silent passion
rough but sensual
Soon enough we will combust
and explode everywhere
I'm his go between lady his
horny angelic naughty girl
rough but sensual
Soon enough we will combust
and explode everywhere
I'm his go between lady his
horny angelic naughty girl
Published 15th Jul 2013
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15th Jul 2013 10:54pm
15th Jul 2013 11:02pm
Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 11:05pm
tommie,
You naughty girl, you! LOL!!! Loved the line:
"silent passion, rough but sensual"
Enjoyed!
tornado
You naughty girl, you! LOL!!! Loved the line:
"silent passion, rough but sensual"
Enjoyed!
tornado
15th Jul 2013 11:54pm
16th Jul 2013 00:59am
Whoop whoop!! Whoop there she is! Whoop there she is !
sassy n classic b ink Bomb
sassy n classic b ink Bomb
16th Jul 2013 5:06am
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 2:16am
Nice short little-ditty tl...
16th Jul 2013 5:07am
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16th Jul 2013 5:17am
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 6:08am
If you do explode can I pick up the pieces? :D Define "go between lady." I'm glad you are embracing your angelic side ;)
16th Jul 2013 6:38am
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 6:45am
I'd search until I put you back together;)
17th Jul 2013 11:40pm
I like the polarity in this poem.
"Horny angelic naughty girl."
"Rough but sensual."
You portray your inner freak so well in such a short piece.
"Horny angelic naughty girl."
"Rough but sensual."
You portray your inner freak so well in such a short piece.
17th Jul 2013 11:52pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 00:37am
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19th Jul 2013 00:42am
ROFLMFAO...thank you so much for that great comment Gerard!!I really LOL on that one!!You're hilarious! ;)
