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Make it end
I want it to end
This constant cycle,
Of everyone saying i'm nothing,
Saying I disapoint them,
The tears just keep coming,
Salty emotions down my face,
Maybe this time i'll OD,
Less painful, right?
I need help,
I need a friend,
I need someone,
Anyone,
Make this end...
This constant cycle,
Of everyone saying i'm nothing,
Saying I disapoint them,
The tears just keep coming,
Salty emotions down my face,
Maybe this time i'll OD,
Less painful, right?
I need help,
I need a friend,
I need someone,
Anyone,
Make this end...
Published 15th Jul 2013
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16th Jul 2013 3:15am
Anonymous
11th Sep 2013 1:45am
This is so sad and your emotions comes thru in the piece.
A side note, the typo 'disappoint', in the 4th sentence.
A side note, the typo 'disappoint', in the 4th sentence.
18th May 2014 2:18am
is mentioned in the poem something about OD, well if you do use sleeping pills I've heard those are the least painful, and thanks for sharing:]
