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Without Touch
She hardened me without touch
yet somehow I knew her fingers
were smooth as silk, a playful
smile lit up her face,
damn, those lips, I bet they're
tasty,
I could look into her enchanting
eyes for hours, she rewards
me by drowning me in those
beautiful pools of
blue,
I remember to breath, feeling
my chest release,my visions
have flown, now belonging
to the space between her
and I,
she replies blowing a kiss,
from her heart to mine,
what I wouldn't give
to feel her hands on my
flesh,to hear her whisper
my name
yet somehow I knew her fingers
were smooth as silk, a playful
smile lit up her face,
damn, those lips, I bet they're
tasty,
I could look into her enchanting
eyes for hours, she rewards
me by drowning me in those
beautiful pools of
blue,
I remember to breath, feeling
my chest release,my visions
have flown, now belonging
to the space between her
and I,
she replies blowing a kiss,
from her heart to mine,
what I wouldn't give
to feel her hands on my
flesh,to hear her whisper
my name
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Re: Without Touch
Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 2:15pm
Wow! Your preaching to the choir with this one ;) A wonderful reality piece. Well done Tommie!
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15th Jul 2013 9:30pm
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 2:17pm
nice little write tl
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15th Jul 2013 9:31pm
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Re: Without Touch
15th Jul 2013 2:41pm
Her not guessing but knowing exactly brings out the truth of the autoerotic mirror, an exploding and dynamic series of insights on the state of human sexology. By inversion, masturbation is homosexual, voyuerism is rape, and judgment is idolotry....the subtextuality of your work shows its strength as much by your camera angle as by your cropped diction.
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Re: Without Touch
15th Jul 2013 7:36pm
The things you women do to us.
How you make us wanna rise with your beauty.
How you make us wanna rise with your beauty.
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15th Jul 2013 9:35pm
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 9:27pm
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 10:10pm
I liked the visual. I understood that space :)
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15th Jul 2013 11:00pm
Re: Without Touch
15th Jul 2013 10:48pm
Without Touch - but a longing to be touched for good reason.
"She hardened me without her touch" - so do a good many erotic pin ups to male readers.
"She hardened me without her touch" - so do a good many erotic pin ups to male readers.
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15th Jul 2013 11:01pm
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