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a musing
that's what people do to each other
they drive each other to suicide
or murder
that's when you know love has been accomplished
they drive each other to suicide
or murder
that's when you know love has been accomplished
Published 2nd Dec 2010
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2nd Dec 2010 1:32pm
i really like this one. just not exactly sure if you meant "accomplished" at the end, or "attained"? either way, i love the "or murder" line. [:
2nd Dec 2010 2:30pm
thanks its a strange assumption/thought on the subject.. yeah i think accomplished is exactly the right word :)
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2nd Dec 2010 3:48pm
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2nd Dec 2010 4:15pm
sane? thats a new one for me :) wow its amazing i can get you teary im glad my work touches you so :)
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3rd Dec 2010 2:42am
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