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Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 1:38pm
Nicely done...enjoyed :) x
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13th Jul 2013 2:20pm
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
13th Jul 2013 2:14pm
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13th Jul 2013 2:22pm
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 4:12pm
short but well put
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re: Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
14th Jul 2013 1:58am
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
13th Jul 2013 4:16pm
re: Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
14th Jul 2013 2:00am
Thank u my sweetness, I'm not a Dan of these
BUT I don't mind attempting some different styles n form on occasion :)
BUT I don't mind attempting some different styles n form on occasion :)
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 6:41pm
Tha-dump!
Tha-dump! :)
Tha-dump! :)
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re: Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
14th Jul 2013 2:01am
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
13th Jul 2013 10:27pm
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14th Jul 2013 2:10am
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 10:28pm
Teasingly put...simple as that...;)
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14th Jul 2013 2:11am
Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 6:20am
Read this short hot poem
As a soft sexy whisper ...
Dry silk becomes wet
As a soft sexy whisper ...
Dry silk becomes wet
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re: Re: Hey you, A Haiku...'HeatBeat'
14th Jul 2013 12:40pm