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I Confess
Forgive me Father for I have sinned
Its been o’ so long since my last
Confession
I have been impure in all things
I beg forgiveness from the almighty
I have stolen
A box of formula
For my hungry son
From the supermarket
Across the street
I have taken
A piece of cloth
From a stranger’s clothline
To wrap my child
In his cold nakedness
I have lied
To get a job
Saying I had a certificate
When all I had was street smart
But I needed to shelter my son
I have used swear words
At the policemen who arrested me
To the social worker who took away my son
I was frightened and alone
Tell me Father, where was God then?
Its been o’ so long since my last
Confession
I have been impure in all things
I beg forgiveness from the almighty
I have stolen
A box of formula
For my hungry son
From the supermarket
Across the street
I have taken
A piece of cloth
From a stranger’s clothline
To wrap my child
In his cold nakedness
I have lied
To get a job
Saying I had a certificate
When all I had was street smart
But I needed to shelter my son
I have used swear words
At the policemen who arrested me
To the social worker who took away my son
I was frightened and alone
Tell me Father, where was God then?
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12th Jul 2013 2:23pm
Re: I Confess
12th Jul 2013 3:46pm
This speaks volumes of the struggle many face in the past, now and probably in the future. Wonderful write Grace.
Good luck.
Good luck.
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12th Jul 2013 3:59pm
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Anonymous
12th Jul 2013 4:09pm
I am sure you'll be forgiven grace.....likd this write
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re: Re: I Confess
13th Jul 2013 00:06am
Thanks Strider...I think anybody can be forgiven for greater love has no man than those that give their life for another...
Re: I Confess
12th Jul 2013 4:15pm
So many truths,lived out daily--Wonderful Write Dear Grace-Good luck in the comp.!!!
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re: Re: I Confess
13th Jul 2013 00:07am
Thats so true Soul, I know of instances and people who went to jail cos they stole baby food for their babies.
re: re: Re: I Confess
13th Jul 2013 00:59am
:( yes I have known a couple who did the same...they had to fight for their baby too the state was taking it away...took almost a whole year before they got the Baby back....so many horrid stories with such things...
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13th Jul 2013 1:17am
Sad. The couple here had to tough it up for their baby including paying a hefty fine. Six months jail and a fine, how is that for trying to feed a baby, eh.
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13th Jul 2013 1:36am
indeed. that's help for Ya eh? need financial help...hit You with a fine ...incredible what people endure at times just to feed and clothe:(
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12th Jul 2013 6:08pm
re: Re: I Confess
13th Jul 2013 00:08am
Re: I Confess
13th Jul 2013 6:10am
Father are you listening or do you have another child up your robe.
Beautifully written you definitely should win the competition.
Beautifully written you definitely should win the competition.
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re: Re: I Confess
13th Jul 2013 3:16pm
Thats a good twist, eh, deathpuppy...another child up his robe! :)...thanks for the encouragement and kind words.