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Dolla dolla, Kill...
It's that green...money I mean
that spreads the evil scene
folks willin' to do anythin...'
"Hey mista for a dolla I'll sing
do dat 'mic check' on yo thang"
as she gives her 'lowered by life' lean
psst, know whada mean?
It's such an evil inspired kinda green
see two frail figures fightin'... dope fiends
temptation's five dollas make 'em scream
searchin' for the escape in 'ecstasy's illusionary beam'
yielding bad results... from body, the blood streams
He came on headstrong... head long
into that game of life, chosen wrong
the path he walked for finanicial gain
'slick quickies' in cars n' sleazy bars
fouled 'shame aways' brought immense pain
starin' in the mirror with a fist full of green
money can get him everything... but his dream
Folks'll keep doin'
whatever to attain that green,
this is simply a forewarn to ya'll
just what it mean
to trade a soul...
doin' anything may get you more green
but see how long you survive life's pain
for that coveted 'dirty green'
as it births more evil than one's ever seen...
that spreads the evil scene
folks willin' to do anythin...'
"Hey mista for a dolla I'll sing
do dat 'mic check' on yo thang"
as she gives her 'lowered by life' lean
psst, know whada mean?
It's such an evil inspired kinda green
see two frail figures fightin'... dope fiends
temptation's five dollas make 'em scream
searchin' for the escape in 'ecstasy's illusionary beam'
yielding bad results... from body, the blood streams
He came on headstrong... head long
into that game of life, chosen wrong
the path he walked for finanicial gain
'slick quickies' in cars n' sleazy bars
fouled 'shame aways' brought immense pain
starin' in the mirror with a fist full of green
money can get him everything... but his dream
Folks'll keep doin'
whatever to attain that green,
this is simply a forewarn to ya'll
just what it mean
to trade a soul...
doin' anything may get you more green
but see how long you survive life's pain
for that coveted 'dirty green'
as it births more evil than one's ever seen...
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Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 1:09pm
Absolutely true. Human nature has been one of historical greed for the gold, the silver, the material, and that has been a trip down the path of temptation to choices badly made. We do not learn from our elders or from the bad choices of others. Humans are born to ignore history and make the same mistakes over and over again.
Very well stated
Bravo
Kitty
Very well stated
Bravo
Kitty
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re: Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 1:19pm
Yup can't disagree with a thing u said my dear
and I'm very grateful for ur support always :)
and I'm very grateful for ur support always :)
Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 1:39pm
re: Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 2:19pm
What u said n the fact you support my work is good mouth sweetness :) thank u!
Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 2:07pm
Ohhh yes yes this is on point! The root of all evil. You did the damn thing!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 2:28pm
C'mere n give me a big hug! Mmmmmm yea lol thank u sweetie pie appreciate u always! :)
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11th Jul 2013 2:34pm
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11th Jul 2013 2:45pm
Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 4:41pm
What makes the world go around they say, I say it is what destroys.
Great write Poetikmind, much depth.
Great write Poetikmind, much depth.
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re: Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 8:35pm
Yea u know it lady I'm sure it won't improve in our lifetime too smh... But we can always hope! :) thank u sweetie :)
Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 7:23pm
So many precious things in our lives that are free. Yet we pass them by to get bigger and better. Truthful write!! :)
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re: Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
12th Jul 2013 00:35am
Yup yup ur right, n it's why I'm always worried bout the future n what it will become when my lil girl n her generation r trying to
survive in it... Thank u my dear friend appreciate u much :)
survive in it... Thank u my dear friend appreciate u much :)
Re: Dolla dolla, Kill...
11th Jul 2013 10:36pm
' in my deacon voice' ---> WEllllll!!!!!
*pass the collection plate around*
#CHURCH
*pass the collection plate around*
#CHURCH
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12th Jul 2013 00:38am
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31st Jan 2017 1:14am
Tru dat we do indeed...n thanks so much for the time n thoughts n RL add...