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A typical, sinister
love
creeps up
slowly
and i am
floating
on my back
l
a
n
g
u
i
d
l
y
in our
sea of
collective
deceptions
oblivious-
until the day
came
that I realized
you
are not what
I made you
but sullen
and dull
and I think
I am
loving
this love
more than
you
(I like you
better on
paper
anyways)
So don't yeild-
but harden
your
indifference
fuels this
fire
I have finally
outgrown you
(just not "you")
my beautiful,
maniacal
love.
love
creeps up
slowly
and i am
floating
on my back
l
a
n
g
u
i
d
l
y
in our
sea of
collective
deceptions
oblivious-
until the day
came
that I realized
you
are not what
I made you
but sullen
and dull
and I think
I am
loving
this love
more than
you
(I like you
better on
paper
anyways)
So don't yeild-
but harden
your
indifference
fuels this
fire
I have finally
outgrown you
(just not "you")
my beautiful,
maniacal
love.
Published 30th Nov 2010
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30th Nov 2010 6:32pm
2nd Dec 2010 7:04pm
30th Nov 2010 7:55pm
I like the short quick lines, and the structure of it. It addds so much personality. The individual lines make so much music
2nd Dec 2010 4:11pm
i agree! im loving the structure, flows perfectly with the words... good job!
2nd Dec 2010 7:04pm
2nd Dec 2010 7:04pm
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- Edited 13th Sep 2018 6:45am
2nd Oct 2011 7:28pm
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