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Raw
I like it raw
high gloss overrun
with her saliva.
There’ll be nothing
lingering between us
except for a film of her lush
viscous
Gewurz-tram-in-er.
I observe
from beneath her flesh
poised
perfectly pointed jaw
mute gasp as she
slips
it
in
her mouth.
Delectable Sashimi slam-mer
tantalising Nori-ng headlock.
Whores d‘oeuvre Carpaccio
cures my bitter-salt vein.
Punching the raw carcass
breaking my bones
healing her butcher
with cleaver blow.
Yearling of my
heartache
pounding
the butcher’s block
Frenching the fore-
skin from my bone.
The feeling I get
when sliced in two
medium rare won’t cut it.
There’s only one way
to serve me
viande crue, that’s
glossy red-blue.
She likes her meat
well-done
I want it
raw
to the bone.
This poem was submitted in the Food comp
Written by
case28
(Alexander Case)
Published 10th Jul 2013
| Edited 11th Jul 2013
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10th Jul 2013 2:28pm
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10th Jul 2013 2:33pm
Merci Gabriel, I'm glad you enjoyed this feast.
I hope I was on the money with my french.
I hope I was on the money with my french.
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10th Jul 2013 2:44pm
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10th Jul 2013 3:01pm
Yeah, I thought I'd better finish that poem it's been sitting there giving me dirty looks for a week.
I'm glad it gave you an appetite.
Thanks Theo for reading and for your comments... it made me laugh.
I'm glad it gave you an appetite.
Thanks Theo for reading and for your comments... it made me laugh.
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10th Jul 2013 3:48pm
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10th Jul 2013 5:12pm
Thanks heaps Magdalena. This poem started off being a dark sinister piece, but after a week I came back to it and moulded it into an erotic feast.
Thanks for the nice comments. :)
Thanks for the nice comments. :)
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10th Jul 2013 5:26pm
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10th Jul 2013 5:29pm
Yep, a good steak should be served up every morning and night.
Thanks for reading man.
Thanks for reading man.
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10th Jul 2013 9:50pm
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