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GB...Oh The Way He Turns Me On
At his feet kissing each toe
soft lips on his smoking hot
body
hands gently stroke his legs
rising higher and higher
reaching his stomach
fingers jump over his
perfect toned body
like speed bumps
mouth tracing
the outline
of his
frame
I would do anything he
wanted anything he asked
me to do or demanded
from me
I would lick his ass and
love every minute of it
if that's what
he liked
His eyes alone turn me
on like nobody ever
could before
his mouth so delicious
and then he speaks
my oh my I feel my
southern region
about to drip
Feeling my blood rushing
hot wanting him to
feed me everything
he's got
and more
soft lips on his smoking hot
body
hands gently stroke his legs
rising higher and higher
reaching his stomach
fingers jump over his
perfect toned body
like speed bumps
mouth tracing
the outline
of his
frame
I would do anything he
wanted anything he asked
me to do or demanded
from me
I would lick his ass and
love every minute of it
if that's what
he liked
His eyes alone turn me
on like nobody ever
could before
his mouth so delicious
and then he speaks
my oh my I feel my
southern region
about to drip
Feeling my blood rushing
hot wanting him to
feed me everything
he's got
and more
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9th Jul 2013 3:17pm
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9th Jul 2013 3:58pm
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 3:49pm
Nice write tl...
strider...
strider...
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9th Jul 2013 3:59pm
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 5:21pm
Who the hell is GB? I'll have what he's having ;) Nice fantasy, or reality, piece :)
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9th Jul 2013 5:26pm
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 5:31pm
I'm a vegetarian so thanks but no thanks ;D
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9th Jul 2013 5:35pm
Even if I was a vegetarian and it meant sudden death I would still eat this fine ass man!!!Die smiling! :-D
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 7:42pm
Now that is love pure and simple ;)
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10th Jul 2013 2:12pm
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 8:17pm
I wasn't gonna say it :D
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Re: GB...Oh The Way He Turns Me On
9th Jul 2013 7:27pm
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10th Jul 2013 2:13pm
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Favourite line: "I feel my southern region about to drip." (You Southern Belle or Northern Girl?)
Pic reminiscent of statues of Greek gods like Dionysius (god of pleasure) or Apollo.
Pic reminiscent of statues of Greek gods like Dionysius (god of pleasure) or Apollo.
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re: Re: GB...Oh The Way He Turns Me On
10th Jul 2013 2:18pm
He sure is purty ain't he??....lol....
I'd lick every single drop of his Scottish sweat!!He's deliciousness!
I'd lick every single drop of his Scottish sweat!!He's deliciousness!
Re: GB...Oh The Way He Turns Me On
10th Jul 2013 9:55pm
Whew...oh man...any man would be LUCKY to have you ;-) such a hot write...
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12th Jul 2013 1:37am
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12th Jul 2013 1:38am
Re: GB...Oh The Way He Turns Me On
12th Jul 2013 1:30am
Damn when a man makes a woman want to lick his ass..that means wedding bells, babies and whatever the fuck she wants..
fucking awesome poems
shit what do I need to do to be this guy
fucking awesome poems
shit what do I need to do to be this guy
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12th Jul 2013 1:39am
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