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But really, I never knew this...
When I saw you,
for the very first time
I died...
Washed away
a tsumanu birthed within
this sea of joyous jubilation...
As time
did a slow waltz across my soul
and tranquil melodies
sang to the angels
while they languished
in the sun’s eye...
soft, wet kisses
escaped from paused lips
along their journey to heaven...
so lord let me
not awaken from this
paragon of gluttonous delirium,
until a voice shatters the stilliness
throughtout this dawning
arousing a network
of emotions and I die again...
for the very first time
I died...
Washed away
a tsumanu birthed within
this sea of joyous jubilation...
As time
did a slow waltz across my soul
and tranquil melodies
sang to the angels
while they languished
in the sun’s eye...
soft, wet kisses
escaped from paused lips
along their journey to heaven...
so lord let me
not awaken from this
paragon of gluttonous delirium,
until a voice shatters the stilliness
throughtout this dawning
arousing a network
of emotions and I die again...
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Re: But really, I never knew this...
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6th Jul 2013 00:53am
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 2:01am
This sounds like the beginning of creation. all love coalescing...
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re: Re: But really, I never knew this...
6th Jul 2013 2:07am
Creation of what? lol thank u for ur sweetness but it's pure fantasy in my ever dreaming head lol appreciate u babe :)
Re: But really, I never knew this...
6th Jul 2013 4:59am
...the beauty of this has hypnotized me! Once again, I'm speechless! So beautiful! Xo
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6th Jul 2013 12:02pm
Aaaawwww you know I need to cut n paste
your beautiful comments so every time I'm down I can
read it for a smile! :) thank you so much sweetness :)
your beautiful comments so every time I'm down I can
read it for a smile! :) thank you so much sweetness :)
Re: But really, I never knew this...
6th Jul 2013 6:05am
Awww.. its so lovely heavenly poem :) One of the sweetest love poem i have read :)
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re: Re: But really, I never knew this...
6th Jul 2013 12:05pm
WOW u touched my heart baby! Thank u! Truly deeply grateful for your support always
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 8:33am
ooohhh, that was like erotica it was so sensual..nice work man :-)
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6th Jul 2013 12:08pm
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 11:13am
To add to what Gabriel's said about oceans, that's love isn't it? As tranquil and destructive as the power of the ocean.
Great ink man.
Great ink man.
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re: Re: But really, I never knew this...
6th Jul 2013 12:11pm
Well yes it absolutely is! Truly, deeply appreciate your thoughts n undying support my friend :)
Re: But really, I never knew this...
6th Jul 2013 3:12pm
The power of passion is unmistakable, immutable and very destructive like Gabriel said, but we love it!
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8th Jul 2013 12:42pm
YES i agree on both fronts n yea i thank you for that sweet undying support u give me :)