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Blue Eyes~
Sometimes my eyes display a
sad and weary look
Most of the time my eyes are
happy,showing the crows feet
that I wear so well
At times my eyes may look
sultry and inviting
They hold past lovers and
feverish thoughts, sometimes
staring into something new
Searching for love or lust in
hidden places
They are always warm and
caring
All of my emotions are
reflected through my
eyes true blue
sad and weary look
Most of the time my eyes are
happy,showing the crows feet
that I wear so well
At times my eyes may look
sultry and inviting
They hold past lovers and
feverish thoughts, sometimes
staring into something new
Searching for love or lust in
hidden places
They are always warm and
caring
All of my emotions are
reflected through my
eyes true blue
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2nd Jul 2013 2:04am
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Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2013 5:15am
2nd Jul 2013 2:24am
I've written several drafts in my mind ;) Beautiful piece describing those beautiful gems. Wonderful tribute to your blues and a guide to your eye-revealed emotions for any loving observer :)
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2nd Jul 2013 2:27am
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2nd Jul 2013 12:46pm
Mmmm n how exquisitely beautiful those eyes, like this ink is! beautiful stuff my friend :)
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2013 1:55pm
bright blue it seems tl.
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2nd Jul 2013 11:34pm
I think your eyes are hypnotically inviting and very loving....like a painting...
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